Towerlands Pitch, analysis

Okay. I’m going to look at my original pitch with fresh eyes now. I actually wrote the first draft four days ago and I’ve gotten feedback from two people I trust. First, let me reread it and give my first impressions. My first goal is to maximize the “awesome ideas per sentence” ratio. How’d I do? I’ll go section by section. Intro I don’t think this helps pitch the game. I’m excluding it entirely. A…

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Towerlands Pitch, first draft

The following text is the pitch I wrote for my new Towerlands fantasy setting. Towerlands is a fantasy setting that I’ve been working on steadily for about two years but it’s really a collection of ideas I’ve been exploring for decades. Those of you who have played in my games before will probably recognize elements I’ve used before. This is a brief introduction to my labor of love and an invitation to join me in…

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